Hero is the name where every one wanted to have. Heroes were persons who we recognized from their courage and spirits. From that, they always receive huge respects and praises. But there’s was a hero that I admired and influenced on my life. The hero who don’t have extraordinary power. The hero who doesn’t need respects and praises from the others. The hero who didn’t wear capes but wear aprons. The hero who take care of me since I was born. The hero was my mom. My mom was in late forties, but she looks as young as the thirties. Sometimes people thought that she was my sister. My mom have deep brown eyes, shoulder length hair and a long face. She loves to stay fit all the time, she woke at 5 every morning for a daily jog. She also love to take cardio activities, such as yoga and dancing. Although, she likes to wear extremely colorful and unusual clothing. There was a day that she wore a long red funky dress, high heels, fashionable sun glasses and a Mickey Mouse Hat. She’s usually very kind and generous, but don’t even dare to make she became angry, she can be as scary as your nightmare. Every morning after she finished her daily jog, she rushed to make breakfast for everyone in the house. Then, she dressed up and take my little brother to the school. After that, she go to her office and pick my brother up in the afternoon. I know that she was very tired, but she never complained about it. Moreover, she is one of the best person to talk about problems and concerns. Because she is a good listener, and she always find a solution to make the situation better. She always understand a teenager like me, and she always teach me to use reasons not emotions. Over all, she was my hero and my beloved mom. She teaches me everything, from educative stuff to skills for life. Without my mom, there will be no me today. And I wanted to tell that I love my mom. Descriptive essay what a type of essay that describe thing in many ways. This was a descriptive essay that I wrote about my mom.
From this assignment, I learned to plan and draft for an essay. This was also my first time to write a descriptive essay.
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He/She was my classmate in the class 1002. I met he/she since the start of the school. At first, he/she rarely talked,I thought that he/she was a quiet and shy person. He/She also looks a bit scary too, because he/she has a tanned-skin, a fierce look and somehow looked like a depressed boy/girl (I'm sorry, but it was the truth). However, that was completely wrong! After a few weeks of school, he/she was actually very friendly, talkative and sociable. He/She was very sporty too, he can play any sports and excellent at basketball. He/she was one of the person you'll wanted to be friend with. But it was a bad news that he can't stay with you at the weekend, because he had to go back to Suphanburi to meet his family and his buffalos. The the main concept for this writing is to describe a person without telling the person name. I uses many describing methods such as his/her physical appearance, achievement or even behaviors. And after that, we guess the person as a class.
From this assignment, I learned to describe a person in many different ways. Describe a major environmental problems and what you believe should be done about it.4.5 billion years ago, our planet, the earth, was formed. 600 million years later, one of the most marvelous gifts that the god has given to the earth, lives, had begun. Everything went well until 200 thousand years ago, a kind of organisms with amazing intelligence ever existed had evolved and begun to take everything in this planet for its own benefits. The organism that considered itself as a dominant organism on this world, human, has brought chaos to this world along with its development. As humans have lived on the earth, many natural resources have been used without any limits causing the environment to deteriorate. The three major issues on the environment include global warming, pollution, and natural resource depletion. One of the main environmental issues that has been discussed for many years is global warming. The global warming is an environmental problem occurred from increasing of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. Carbon dioxide, methane, and CFCs are some examples of the greenhouse gases which can trap heat and keep the heat within the earth’s atmosphere causing the raise in temperature of the earth. While using many natural resources of humans like burning fuels in car, producing electricity from natural gases gave mankind energy, it also produced greenhouse gases at the same time. As the global warming has become more and more concerning problem, many countries around the world have decided to make an agreement to reduce emission of the greenhouse gases. However, a large amount of the greenhouse gases still be released due to the demand in the energy and industrial products of humans, so it tends to be impossible to stop the emission of these gases. In addition, the things that humans can do for the environment is to reduce deforestation and increase plant growing because photosynthesis of plants can absorb carbon dioxide and produce oxygen for living things to use. Although this could not solve the whole issue, it’s still better than ignore this problem. Another chief problem is pollution. The pollution is also a considerable environmental problem which can be classified into two major types, including air pollution and water pollution. Since machines have been developed, they were used numerously to replace humans in industrial fields. Nevertheless, water has also involved in some processes of manufacturing, it was used in contact with harmful chemicals, heavy metals, radioactive waste and organic sludge which will be released directly into lakes and rivers. In some cases, garbage and human litters were dumped into water bodies causing problems to aquatic animals and also ecosystem. The industrial chemicals were found in fishes which are later consumed by humans. Not to mention air pollutants, the air pollutions are mainly caused by burning of fossil fuels from vehicles, power plants and emission from factories. In result of respiratory problems and heart problems. Also, acid rain can be formed by water droplets combine with harmful gases and fall down to the ground dealing the great damages to humans, animals and plants. As humans need to rely on industrial products, it would be difficult to eliminate all of the pollutions. Thus, the things that mankind should do for our world is to do the water treatment before release it back to the environment and also decrease the amount of gases that can be released. A further point to consider in the topic of environmental problems is natural resource depletion. The depletion of natural resources is the running out of resources which caused from mankind. As the humans have lived in this world, the population of human has increased continuously. Along with this increasing, the need of habitats and resources increase rapidly, while the number of the habitats and resources tend to decrease due to the deforestation, using of fossil fuels, natural gases and oil to provide energy to the humankind. These resources consuming caused the trees, oil, fuels, and other natural resources to decrease and run out because these resources take a lot of time for them to be recreated. Therefore, depletion of the natural resources should be solved before there will be remain any resources for the mankind to use, so the thing that we can do is to limit the uses of the natural resources or use them wisely and worthily. As regard to the discussed issues, it is clear that our world has faced to many environmental problems like global warming, pollution, and also the depletion of natural resources. Nonetheless, there can be no doubt that most of these issues were occurred from the humankind. It is undeniable that the earth would not be polluted without humans, and these issues affect not only the humans but also the rest of this entire world. For these reasons, the humankind should take responsibility for these environmental problems. The challenge for the society is to find the ways to solve these problems together. These issues would not be able to solve by the laws or governments of every countries, but these issues would be solved by the collaboration of everyone. In addition, we should realize that nature can live without humans, but humans cannot live without nature. I was assigned to write an essay on chosen topic, which I chose environmental problems. Because nowadays, these problems became more and more serious. And I'm covering three major environmental problems including global warming, pollution, and natural resource depletion.
Since I had studied at MUIDS (Mahidol University International Demonstration School), my writing skill had improved in some certain ways. That's because most of the assignments and projects were assigned in writing form, such as e-portfolio and reflections for English classes. Which is great because I got great chances to practice and improve on my writing skills. Therefore, I think that I had improved on my vocabulary ranges. I started to use varieties of words that I never used before, searching synonyms of some words in the thesauruses and looked up for some words in the dictionaries. However, I always wanted to improve on my grammar and sentence structure. Even though, I had already learned both of it in English classes, but I didn't understand it that much. Remembering all the tenses, structures and all those thing is a hard task for me, and it reduces me confident in writing. Which I hope that I could slowly develop and improve my writing skills in every way. I noticed all these thing by comparing my writing with a few essays I had written a year ago, and I hoped that I could gradually develop and improve my writing skill in the near future.
I've got a chance to pair up and wrote an essay about environmental problems. Which this assignment was to review our own essay and our friend essay based on a rubrick including 8 common errors in writing. I was surprised due to the number of mistakes I have done without noticing them. The left picture was self-review of my essay and the right picture was a review form other pairs.
From this assignment, I learned to check check common errors in writing and also learned to write properly. Also, this work reminds me to check and review my work to reduce mistakes. Errors can occurs in writings, especially English writing. These are 8 common errors in writing, including pronoun antecedent, pronoun reference, subject verb-agreement, run-on sentence, fragment, capitalization, parallelism and punctuations.
From this assignment, I learned and understood all eight common errors in writing, and learned to write correctly. If I could spend a day with any famous person, I would like to be with my favorite singer, The Toys. Thanwa boonsungnern or as known as the Toys, is a singer, musician, and song writer. He had participated and was the winner of Overdrive Guitar Contest 9. Which later started to make his own songs and posted on YouTube. One of his best-known song is “Nah Nao Tee Laeo” or “Last Winter” in English. I would like to meet him mainly because of 3 reasons. The first is that he was my favorite singer. His songs are very unique and charming. From that, I would like to ask him on how he write and produce his awesome songs. Also, what are the inspirations for him to write his songs. Also, I would like to know his lifestyles. He seems to have a strange lifestyle which I would enjoy to see. Such as his practicing routines. And lastly, I just wanted to be as cool as him. I once stop playing music instruments, but his songs inspire me to come back to play these instruments again.
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